Thursday, December 27, 2007

The night, one b'ful l'le star 'n' the dawn






























One night I saw one b'ful l'le star
Dancing on the dark carpet of night
It shone ‘n’ made me smile
For it was b’ful- just like a dream
‘n’ I felt oh yeah, This is the one!
This is the one I was waiting for!
I was so excited that I could barely
Stay still or hold a thought in my head
‘n’ so I smiled ‘n’ smiled ‘n’ smiled
I built a castle in the sky
I built a stairway
I built a world around that shining star
‘n’ while I was busy making it
The night died ‘n’ hence the star
I looked at it one last time
It still looked b’ful
It shone ‘n’ made me cry
‘n’ then the next moment it disappeared
Into the sky…

And then something happened
I saw something even more b’ful
I asked life, “What is it?”
She said, “Dawn”!

It is the dawn!


6 comments:

Fibo said...

HAPPY NEW YEAR :)

Unknown said...

salaam asif,...incredible!!!u r too good with words!!!!i am realy impressed..

Asif H Siddiqui said...

Wassalam...
Thanks for such nice words dear...

sana said...

long time nothing new there on your blog?

ambyrocks said...

wonderful..wonderful thought !

there can be many menaings to it .. not to give up , hope , if one one door closes somewhere another one opens ..or may be one should move on coz nothing is finite and there is always something good waiting for us !

everyone can pick a thought from this piece of your writing to suit their situation . loved it absolutely.

Unknown said...

Loved the positivity in this piece of your writing. It defines hope in every sense. You are just too good with words. I am absolutely impressed!